I’m not sure how such a good premise for a story could be so boring, and, at the same time, just so much text! At 593 pages this book is dense. And, no matter what format you open this in, every pages is just super small, offset text. And at 593 pages, you aren’t going to resize the screen you are looking at.

So before you even get into the story itself, it’s a terrible start. And when you do get into the story it’s just… it’s not edited. Uninteresting drivel, and the author takes no responsibility for their actions at any point in the 600 page tome.

If anyone is interested in this — go ahead. It needs a big rewrite or editors eye. ( )